The night war began
the sky caught on fire,
blue flames that could consume worlds,
and stars pierced with our bullets
plummeted;
tracing trails of silver lace into our black atmosphere
and the cries from Earth rose
and resounded in all the corners of the universe
in silent echoes that only emptiness could hear
and our deaths fell back into the Earth,
bodies with punctured lungs, fractured ribs,
and minds that forgot but still are
all into the fire at our center
This left some beautiful and strong imagery in my mind. Well done!